From Susanna's blog (https://susannahill.com): The 8th Annual Halloweensie Contest!!!!! ~ for children’s writers ~ The Contest: write a 100 word Halloween story appropriate for children (children here defined as 12 and under) (title not included in the 100 words), using the words shiver, cauldron, and howl. Your story can be scary, funny, or anything in between, poetry or prose, but it will only count for the contest if it includes those 3 words and is 100 words (you can go under, but not over!) Get it? Halloweensie – because it’s not very long and it’s for little people (And yes, I know 100 words is short, but that’s part of the fun and the challenge! We got 235 fantastic entries last year, so I know you can do it!) Also, you may use the words in any form – e.g. shivery, cauldrons, howling, whathaveyou NO ILLUSTRATION NOTES PLEASE! (And yes, you may submit more than one entry if you’re so inclined ) Here is my entry of 89 spooky words: Little Miss Halloween By Jennifer Raudenbush Ghoulinda Ghoul so loved to preen-- she longed to be Miss Halloween. At night, she honed her bony wave. By day, she gave toe hairs a shave. She bathed in cauldrons smelling foul and sang her talent: shrieking howl. On Halloween, she met the girls, while inch worms danced between her curls. Her odor captured judges’ hearts-- so nurses hauled them off in carts! Nine shivering girls paled ghostly white, afraid Ghoulinda Ghoul might bite. With howling shriek she seized the crown. Her dream came true in mildewed gown! Categories: Halloween, Halloweensie contest, poetry
49 Comments
10/27/2018 07:50:02 am
Love this creative Halloween beauty contest twist, Jennifer! Nicely done! Favorite line: "she gave toe hairs a shave"! :). Thanks so much for joining in the shivery fun!
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Jennifer Raudenbush
10/27/2018 12:06:20 pm
Ha ha! It was originally "nose hairs," but it was too difficult to say. I'm glad "toe hairs" works just as well!
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10/27/2018 08:04:08 am
Oh my! This is quite the beauty contest contestant. I love the play in words with this couplet: "Her odor captured judges’ hearts--
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Jennifer Raudenbush
10/27/2018 12:07:43 pm
Thanks so much, Colleen!
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Candice Conner
10/27/2018 10:26:20 am
Fabulous imagery! And what a spooktacular twist on beauty pageants--good luck in the contest!
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Jennifer Raudenbush
10/27/2018 12:08:17 pm
Awww, thanks!
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10/27/2018 11:13:11 am
Oh my, Ghoulinda Ghoul so deserved to win. Fun entry, Jennifer.
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Jennifer Raudenbush
10/27/2018 12:08:46 pm
I couldn't agree more, Janet.
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Jennifer Raudenbush
10/27/2018 12:09:30 pm
Thanks!
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10/27/2018 02:56:07 pm
This was so creative, great rhymes, and I loved the ending! Really great job!
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Jen Raudenbush
10/28/2018 06:55:27 am
Thanks, Debbie!
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Jen Raudenbush
10/28/2018 06:55:48 am
Glad you like it :-)
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10/27/2018 08:38:35 pm
Great job! Love the rhymes and beauty contest theme, truly a scream! Good luck!
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Jen Raudenbush
10/28/2018 06:56:42 am
Appreciate your comment :-)
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Jen Raudenbush
10/28/2018 06:57:12 am
Thanks, Carole
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10/28/2018 12:36:03 am
Very funny and original. I love the beauty contest theme and images your story conjures up.
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Jen Raudenbush
10/28/2018 06:57:32 am
Many thanks, MaryAnn!
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Becky Scharnhorst
10/28/2018 12:49:10 am
Great job, Jen! I loved the clever concept and fun language. I think Miss Halloween would make an excellent picture book!
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Jennifer L Raudenbush
10/28/2018 06:58:08 am
Aww, thanks, Becky. That would be awesome!
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10/28/2018 01:27:34 am
The idea of Miss Halloween is fun and your Ghoul character is a riot. Good luck.
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Jen Raudenbush
10/28/2018 06:58:24 am
Thanks, Maria!
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Heather Kinser
10/28/2018 02:45:05 am
Fresh and original character, setting, and plot. Great entry!
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Jen Raudenbush
10/28/2018 06:58:38 am
Wow, thanks!
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10/28/2018 05:44:06 am
I think an illustrator would have no problem illustrating this smelly story. I also loved the part about the toe nails. Well done.
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Jen Raudenbush
10/28/2018 06:59:18 am
:-)
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10/28/2018 09:45:19 am
Really fun story, Jennifer, great opening line! Good luck and Happy Halloweeen!
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Jen Raudenbush
10/29/2018 05:45:21 pm
Thanks, Angela.
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Dee Knabb
10/28/2018 03:55:07 pm
What a fun twist on the beauty contest angle with delightfully gruesome language. Good luck!
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Jen Raudenbush
10/29/2018 05:45:45 pm
Aw, thanks!
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10/29/2018 11:08:11 am
This should be a real contest. Great story. Good luck!
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Jen Raudenbush
10/29/2018 05:46:08 pm
Ha Ha! That's be quite a scream :-)
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Jilanne Hoffmann
10/29/2018 01:16:42 pm
Ew, this will give kids a creepy thrill! Great job!
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Jen Raudenbush
10/29/2018 05:46:27 pm
Thanks, Jilanne.
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Jennifer Raudenbush
10/29/2018 05:46:57 pm
:-) :-)
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Patricia Nozell
10/29/2018 05:36:04 pm
You've conjured up some great images of the Miss Halloween contest - I especially loved the mildewed gown. Happy Halloweensie!
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Jen Raudenbush
10/29/2018 05:47:18 pm
I can see and smell it, too!
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10/31/2018 02:03:14 pm
Great visuals! I was scrunching my nose as I was reading. Cute story!
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Jen Raudenbush
11/1/2018 08:41:10 am
Thanks, Brooke!
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11/1/2018 08:33:16 am
Absolutely brilliant idea...a Halloween beauty contest! I just loved your character, and your story!
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Jen Raudenbush
11/1/2018 08:41:28 am
I appreciate the comment, Jean.
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11/1/2018 08:39:13 am
Wow! Love the visuals from this poem. I can totally picture this as a picture book. Well done Jen!
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Jen Raudenbush
11/1/2018 08:41:48 am
Thanks so much, Traci!
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Andrea Mack
11/9/2018 06:02:16 pm
This is great! I love it! Maybe you can expand this into a pb manuscript??
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Jen Raudenbush
11/15/2018 11:30:18 am
Thanks, Andrea!
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