Below is my entry for Vivian Kirkfield's annual (but new to me!) #50PreciousWords 2018 contest. The challenge is to write a complete children's story containing a beginning, middle, and end in 50 words or less.
PUDDLE (43 words) “Rain again!” her mother muttered. “What a shame!” But Jane’s heart fluttered. Peanut-buttered lips curve wide; grab rain boots and head outside. Tiptoe, tiptoe, hurry, dash! Knees bent low, now jump—splash! Pitter patter back inside. Fly back out, Mom by her side!
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3/6/2018 09:36:55 pm
I love the sensory and action words you've used in this! Good luck with the contest!
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Jennifer Raudenbush
3/7/2018 02:41:57 pm
Thanks so much, Andrea!
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